Narrow Path................. Comments

Life is a narrow slippery lane! Sometimes we slip but we get up once again and the journey of life is never stopped.

A thoughtful write, with many touching lines...... Sense and wisdom that diverge Alone in a deserted land Laughs and cries in solitude A timer that recalls something Life is a narrow slippery lane! Very true said, Salini, life is a narrow slippery lane, just once you slip, everything is gone! ! I liked the way you presented it so well. Loved it.

Loneliness that bulge inside Grooms with wings not prohibit Weapons that grab with senses Senses that march with chaos A spell out of social life...lovely

Yes, often in life the mental patients have to pass through slippery lanes alone and feeling miserable! Everything is uncertain...They fear if their next step may be into a deep chasm! The vulnerability they feel and their loss of rational sense leave them pugnacious, wild and even terrible! They deserve to be sympathized! Great write!

Unsoundness of mind is the saddest thing in the world........feelings of such very well crafted

life is a bit fight for live Weapons that grab with senses Senses that march with chaos A spell out of social life be careful and travel to the opening

True feelings and emotions. I loved it. Thanks.