Narrative Of A Long Night Comments

A great poem! Lofty expression.... just magnificent. To score

Beautifully crafted and very thought provoking. An unusual piece of art. To my Poem List.

This brilliant work takes us to realm of the unconscious mind of the wonderful Poet and we dig into his mind, making us think deeper to fully grasp the meaning of his thoughts.

A great and one of a kind poem characterized by dream like visuals, symbolism and collage and compelling images.

Dear poet Aarzoo Mehek Hello Thank you for sparing your time to read my humble poem, , really your generous commentary encouraging me to write better, kind regards keep writing and stay blessed

Love the imagination and you have so beautifully woven the words into a beautiful poem. Keep writing Soran. A brilliant write up.10++

Dear Valsa, the professional poet and critic; Hello...thanks for your amazing comment, exactly you are right; behind all these indirect images there are a hidden message thankfully you have discovered it.. wish you to stay on the top list all the time

The oak trees drying up because of lack of rain, the stone hearted clouds never shedding a tear drop, the cypress tree tossed by violent gales and the birds that used to roost there losing their homes, the hungry squirrels dying, and the man restlessly tossing in his sleep hearing an ominous sound that nothing is going to be different until the darkness of the century ends. Very deep Soran!

Surrealist poetry is not an easy nut to crack. I often find it hard to explicate the poem and find out what the poet really wants to convey! Here I get some desolate images of decay and hopelessness..

Many thanks Susan for your special way of reading and amazing understanding about this poem, your important and valuable opinion is very important to me and has been much appreciated. All the best...Every success, stay on the top always; -)

Surrealism for sure! You have presented yourself with a challenge yet you delivered reader pleasure quite easily== excellent imagery to provoke reactions and thoughts! 10+++++++

Thank you for reading the tragedy of the hero inside this poem, and thanks again for living with his difficult moments there, it may happen everywhere.. you are so smart, writing excellent and reading very well our teacher, Susan.

I have returned and enjoyed yet another reading of this mysterious masterpiece. Everytime I seem to see sopmething new and glory in a poet's ability to light up the world with his vision! Love it!

So extremely well-written, Soran. I am going to reread this one often and savor the sheer poetic talent flowing through your pen. 10+ and onto my fav list

" The hunters say: We bring comfort of the green of spring and the yellow of summer, but the wild squirrels are grey" Brilliant lines. Your poems I find are images rich adorned by beautiful words. And this one also. Nice write 10+

Stars of the night! ! Thoughts and memories; Like storks seeking for a new Country. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.