Tuesday, July 3, 2007
Narissa Part 1 Comments
Rating: ★4.5
My ocean
Swell, swirl
Push, pull
Drag, drown
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William Jackson
03 July 2007
There is something refreshing about the ocean even when it is threateningly rough and tumble. Fine poem, a lesson for Narissa.
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Yao Tzu
03 July 2007
nice, reminds me of surfing pipeline waves for the first time here in Hawaii.
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8/1/2025 11:04:03 PM # 1.0.0
Warm welcome to the world of poets. Your very first verse bagged a score of 9 out of 10. A nice work. Life is also an ocean. It depends on us as to how we manage to be peaceful and happy in the ocean.