In saline silence
with lisp-the only eloquence
turned I the rosary of breathlessness
and through cracked, soiled and unsightly
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I just don't have words to say how deeply i'm impressed by the intricacy of your verse...it's just profoundly beautiful...
your work too is a rosary of pretty azure beads of words strung together upon the string of silvery imagery true to the multicolored and multilayered nature of humanity's caprice.ahem....good na? ...no? ...well i tried.
I am truely impressed, Rehan. Beautiful Poem! !