Monday, September 11, 2017

Nap Comments

Rating: 5.0

It may have given Jules a bad rap.
To see him taking his lunch break nap.
He would eat a sack lunch and then set his alarm clock.
Take a few winks and then be ready to rock.
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Lamar Cole
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Paul Brookes 13 September 2017

The power of forty winks rested and raring to go great piece

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

A nap boost energy level and improves skills.. Good one

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Practicing Poetess 11 September 2017

Jules was smart- - Some of the greatest and most famous men in history - - inventors, scientists, presidents- - have been known to take power naps. He was a very good employee, I'll wager to say, BECAUSE of his nap. Wise and frugal, too, because he saved a bundle of money by not eating lunch at Applebee's. A very amusing, well-written slice of life.

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