Thursday, August 13, 2009
Naomi Comments
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Light of my life yes its you
Your hugs and kisses fill me with joy
To hear you laugh is like a sun ray through the clouds
The heat of your sweet smelling breath when your face is next to mine
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Luisa Sanchez
13 August 2009
Your a gud writer.......just one critisism.......maybe don't write to much about love it will make the reader want to stop reading your poems
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7/23/2025 6:05:43 PM # 1.0.0
Lovely. My girlfriends name is Naomi also, so I read it to her and she agrees with me that it's a lovely poem. I disagree with your previous commenter, as I do believe that people want to read love poems. Romance isn't dead.