Nano Raining Comments

The processes of nature are closely observed i the first three lines, but then there is a big leap to the final line: THE STREETS OF LIFE ARE FLOODED. I'm assuming you meant this big leap. It's breathtaking and opens up a wide range of meanings, from the most dire to the most hopeful. I'm assuming you meant the outcome to be uncertain, to emphasize the sheer force which we must endure.