Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Nano Poetry-10 Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tuning of a dew drop
With the earth and a leaf
On leaf, it is a pearl
On the earth, it sobs.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Queeny Gona 27 August 2013

Lovely imagery of pearl on leaf.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

excellent nano enjoyed the read

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Valsa George 25 August 2013

A dew drop on a leaf is a pearl and on the earth a sob or tear drop!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 August 2013

wonderful with enough words to stroke the emotions..

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Shahzia Batool 13 August 2013

these lines reveal your poetic observation, and how you connect this phenomenon of nature with the life by the word sobs...a complete image! ! !

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013

lovely imagery for lovely words good poem

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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