Thursday, August 28, 2008

Namely You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I check you out, seeing inside you, I see a big disaster
Nightfall, or your fall, which one will come faster?

I dedicate this poem to the fact that it's hard for you to keep,
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Kyle Jones
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Kee Thampi 11 February 2010

we can write beyond words here this talent made it dedicate this poem to the fact that it's hard for you to keep, A billion heartbeats around the clock allowing you to sleep And it doesn't help you're freezing, and blankets aren't enough All you want is some one there, all you say you need is love

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Chloe Young 18 May 2009

i think this is beautiful

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Tyease Collins 02 September 2008

Awesome poem Kyle... very good job. 20/10 defintely. Keep up the good work -Tyease

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