Nameless The Blameless, The Teen Comments

Elena, i must have been in a real hurry to have not left a longer comment earlier! i love the poem, and the humor in it. it shall soon be displayed with other PH 'friends' poems in January, section A of the usually-monthly showcase, hidden on my PH site. oops! this is the teen one, i just noticed! it WAS starting to seem more teen-like by the 3rd stanza. i DID read both already, apparently, Elena. ha ha. SO, I'LL GET THIS ONE INTO section B eventually. i'll use the non-teen one first, in Section A. in the last stanza, capitalizing he to HE would help readers to get the switch in....Who is at fault. but it is good and shall perhaps challenge readers to be careful readers. of course some may not be 'smart' enough to follow your thinking. i guess it was one of my smarter days when I read it! i especiallyenjoyed: Behold, car keys missing and so is the spare, no means to get from here to there, Who he asks 'Is at fault? ' 'Ha Ha, Nameless the Blameless just got taught.' ................and......great rhyming! a true story? ? ? for you? bri :)

hey, i had to suppress a laugh at the end. good one! very good one! :) bri to MyPoemList