I saw you in the halls today,
a fleeting moment
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Your best poem out of the 3, it shows a lot of expression, and although it didnt rhyme, you made it in such a style where it wasnt just a paragrapph...I like it keep writing
Very interesting. The style is very cool, and the subject matter is different.
Beautiful honest expression and style. I enjoyed the read. I still remember the hallways: -)
Good poem. Loved reading