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I like the last line - both the words and their placement at the very end. But when I read your POET'S NOTES I wondered if I was interpreting this situation correctly. It seemed to me this was a very compressed expression that this rapport is genuine, we could have an on-going relationship which will make up for past disappointments, and I am confident of my situation because he's attracted to me, my siren's song. I hope the poem is positive like that. Do you remember Joan Rivers' comedy routine - Oh, you think so. GROW UP!

delightful! and intriguing... but mostly delightful! ... and intriguing! :)

A song may be low tuned An answer may be true or false Thy name may be strange or familiar intriguing the soul in nightmare