Sunday, July 1, 2018

Naltar Valley Comments

Rating: 5.0

They met on the beach of Hawks Bay at Karachi,
they met on the tombs of sufi saints at Multan,
they met at Sheesh Mahal in the fort of Lahore,
beaches and deserts of Sindh,
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Valsa George 03 July 2018

Along with them we too made a journey through the beaches and hill sides, through the green plains of Punjab and the deserts of Sindh! We closed our eyes when they came too close and their eyes conversed in inaudible silence! You have created a romantic ambiance!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 July 2018

CONGRATULATIONS UR NOW 428/500 TOPMOST POETS

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 July 2018

Naltar please amend it

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 July 2018

I thank DAWN AND SMB for the wonderful photogrphy and you for the poetry My Dawn comes back to me As I come closer to thee O GOD farther you move away from me let me in your garden of grace and then just for a wee day but when I enter Nalta call me from far and as I enter you for all times will you keep me within you No I don't ask of you only pray of you Should not that do as I age away too

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Red Soul 01 July 2018

A wonderful romantic poem Jawad sahab. Sometimes, I feel that the beauty of nature is the most romantic thing ever. Thanks for sharing Mr Jawad.

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2018

Your style of love poetry blends exquisitely with your writing on nature!

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2018

mastermind description of 'ONENESS' through nature- like to qoute except a kiss in love, they came close, so close that lips ceased the lips, words were left for the eyes, still nothing was told by them. wow he is the great finest POET.....

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Hazel Durham 01 July 2018

Beautiful write about places of great beauty and romance blooms with nature in the paradise, love and nature entwined!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Naltar valley carries natural love and attracts attention of poetic mind. Near colorful lakes words of emotion are left. A famous place now shines in your excellent poem...10

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Khalid Saifullah 01 July 2018

Another beautiful poem that makes a reader thinking about the beautiful places in Pakistan.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2018

Nature send them to the Naltar valley and they fell in love with the beauty of the valley. beautiful and figurative presentation......... colourful rivulets...... thank u dear Akhtar.. actually you are giving us a great notion of pakistan countryside and beauty... tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 July 2018

I like this Naltar Valley poem! Wonderful description! A beautiful poem......10

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