Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Naked Comments

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The lights are on but im sitting in the dark,
I can feel my clothes but in naked on the floor,
I'm sitting next to the fire but im freezing cold
Why am i sitting here naked in the dark?
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Rebecca Harvey
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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2009

Oxymorons! So well written. The feeling is complete, saturated.

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Jerry Hughes 28 June 2009

............................get dressed!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 June 2009

A nightmare perhaps.......

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Joseph Poewhit 04 March 2009

Some situation to be in.

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