Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Naked Wire Comments

Rating: 4.3

Oh my love you are in form
How someone can dare to harm
You are so beautiful so warm
No one can surpass your charm
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Mj Lemon 14 March 2015

A magnificent work. This piece has a great flow....a true (universal) love poem... A 10.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 March 2015

So nice smoothly flowed line by line thank you

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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