Naked Truth Poem by me poet yeps poet

Naked Truth

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What of truth.....

compare not your life with others'...
you may not have shoes
but he no feet
take care
we all are born deficient of something something
just think how we must care
to be happy with what we wear
many in December snow
walk almost nude bare.....

The stars are hidden
so no one at all can stare

they want to live in pathways and tunnels
where others smoke
they only smell

So never with a donkey compare
your share
just breathe in some warm
smoky air..

Monday, December 19, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nation,human condition
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
every truth has a HOLE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
s.zaynab kamoonpury 19 December 2022

A good poem with fine advices well expressed. Kudos for this muse!

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me poet yeps poet 20 December 2022

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx szn kkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2022

This is such a GOOD poem, my poet friend. Merry Christmas, mpyp!

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me poet yeps poet 20 December 2022

tnks and MERRY XMAS TO ALL you and yours FRIEND R W since long keep strong

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