Sunday, December 10, 2006

Naked Soul Comments

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I wish that you could understand,
How much I hurt inside,
That when you do those things to me,
You do more damage to my pride.
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Leigh Ladd
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Ashley S 10 December 2006

I enjoyed this poem very much. It is very real sounding and I think everyone can relate to the experience given in your poem. It has a nice flow and was easy to read and understand.

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