Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Naked-Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

This masque doesn't suit you.
When you are putting your,
Entire effort, to touch me,
To enjoy my womanhood shamelessly,
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Neela Nath Das
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Vipins Puthooran 02 August 2012

'tis a strong write.... This kind of people are mad and should send them to asylum! ! ! !

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 August 2012

A powerful and apropos piece for the day..lol! Yor poetic chalice brims over with eloquent anger and magnifecent metaphor. Your commanding voice is heard L O U D and clarion, Nil...You Do Rock, missy! ~FjR~

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Kasia Fedyk 01 August 2012

Wow so true I so understand this poem, for only eyes see not with the truth of the eye but deception of the flesh if you can not touch with the eyes of the soul and see the beauty within. Incredible write Nila.

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Vinod Sharma 01 August 2012

You write with an earthiness, an ethereal energy that is uncommon.

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