Friday, August 23, 2013

Naked Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

For you I am just a ghost,
Washed ashore the banks of shadow,
And you never look at me,
In the same way you ignored me before.
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Lucifera Santez
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Noreen Carden 23 September 2013

Hi Lucifera a beautiful poem rich in feeling and meaning

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Khairul Ahsan 04 September 2013

When I can’t have you, They seem like best substitute…………. Very touchy!

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isaac Anneleng 26 August 2013

wow thats great and some taste of word i there

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 August 2013

I understand your frustration. Try Curse.

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Chandini Jaswal 24 August 2013

An emotional and a lovely poem; I also wrote a similar poem titled, 'I remember the Day' Do read it and let me know about it

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

You write with such deep emotions diving in to raw passion that sinks with forsaken love that ignores and cruelly hurts so profoundly! Inspired and great write!

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