Sunday, January 10, 2016

Naked Lies Comments

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I was playing at the shore of emotions
with the sand of time
gathering unwritten moments
in my lap of destiny
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Asma Khan
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Jo George 17 January 2016

Never came a time when I forgot you tearing my eyes with enormous grieves recalling all those moments that once left me unbroken till today..................WONDERFUL LINES...

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016

I found it very impessive.The last two words maybe are not needed.

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