Saturday, September 5, 2015

Naked Land Comments

Rating: 4.3

Naked Land
Is Freedom
A pure gift
It is living
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 July 2016

A pure gift is much needed! Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 20 September 2015

Unfortunately there is a lot of discussion but no solution to the problem! People who are forced to leave their lands and seek harbor elsewhere are in fact in a dire situation! To be uprooted all of a sudden and to be thrown to a state of absolute uncertainty is something unbearable! We can hardly conceive of the real agony they face! So true Lyn.... no one likes to be a refugee! People who live in comfort and safety should be a little more compassionate to them! No one has sole proprietorship over the land! It should be shared by all! Humane thoughts!

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2015

I have already made an extensive comment on the recent refugee situation, as mentioned in the poem (and poet’s note) The Little Boy On Bodrum Beach - Poem by Tan Pratonix. my comment there may not warm too many hearts to me, but it is there for anyone's consideration. i am not always trying to be funny, but i really had the feeling at first, before i finished the poem, that you MIGHT have been talking about nudist colonies. hmm? nope. thanks for sharing. i've heard that Australia has not been overly-generous in its treatment of would-be refugees seeking asylum in Australia. but i'm not pointing fingers. if God exists, she ‘should be’ more vigilent! bri :)

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2015

The vices like vested interest with authoritarian practice along with aggression has created this term oil in this world. Nobody has any right to snatch the freedom of living in the land and to snatch the freedom of speech. Very nice words.

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Paul Warren 05 September 2015

Spot on. It's easy to say no and harder to stand up for right. I agree.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2015

Definitely freedom is pure gift and life keeps hope of living in such amazing land which simply makes better living. Wise sharing....10

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Rahman Henry 05 September 2015

Beautiful one. I like the poem.

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Smoky Hoss 05 September 2015

Good words, well said.

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

We should all count our blessings instead of enumerating our woes. Nicely penned, Lyn

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