Friday, March 13, 2009

~ Naked Into Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know what to wear for you tonight
Clothes strewn upon the bed
It seems I'll have to come to you
Naked instead
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Sonya Florentino
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Stephen Magill 04 September 2009

wow, you are clothed in your words and you look beautiful

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Michelle Melody 18 March 2009

Sonya, I love how deep your thoughts can be, your words are imaginitive and comes from a beautiful place deep inside you. This poem was a little peep into a womans soul, your sensuality.10

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Kesav Easwaran 17 March 2009

'Clothes strewn upon the bed'... imaginative write...words frank and bold...bright and hot but warming to those who are willing to accept...10

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Mifael Llauderes 17 March 2009

we should come as we are... no pretensions whatsoever. black or white, no gray areas. fine metaphor.

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Lynda Robson 17 March 2009

Best suit there is, your birthday suit lol, well written piece, 10 Lynda xx

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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