Thursday, June 19, 2008

Naked As A Jaybird Observing Them Blued Comments

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It's falling apart...
Quicker than their suspicions,
Can point fingers.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Hanah Smith 19 June 2008

this reminds me of my parents marriage. i dont get how 2 ppl can fight so much... this is really good though.

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Harish K. Thakur 19 June 2008

good poem, great craftsmanship....

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Harish K. Thakur 19 June 2008

good poem, great crftsmanship....

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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