Friday, May 18, 2018

Naked Comments

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you are born naked
they cover you with cloth
for the rest of your life
when you die
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Allan James Saywell
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2018

made me think my dear poet.... death, life, and all that happens in our lives........... sadness, . thank u for your poem.. tony

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dorsey baker 18 May 2018

Very thoughtful poem I think, this is a beautiful poem that delivers a very powerful message about life and death and how they are handled! thanks for sharing 10

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thank you dorsey, i have lost a lot of people from my life lately, my mind is not well, i am in a bad place your comment is most welcome warm regards allan james saywell

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