Naked Comments

Wonderful and touching prose, loved it my friend.

'And I... I will finally dry up my tears'...typically 'Painfully Yours' Poem with melancholia...this shade of poetry wets heart and opens emotion...and you've done that nicely...tenner must be...Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in. n

Lovely poem. Hopd to ur next

Even the symbols between each word didn't mar this. Although I did wonder if those symbols had some meaning that I was missing. Have you read mine - I Cannot Return - Adeline

I came at the land of the sun, at the land of the snow, At the place of the dreams of the fervent immigrants. And alas, I'm naked! My memories remained beyond the ocean. nice narration and lovable poem