Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Naked Comments

Rating: 5.0

The chilling wind that blown north
On an autumn day
Reminded me:
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gul naz
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You found a unique way to give a refreshing revelation of the raw, rabid reality of our nakedness. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

In the eyes of God we are....intriguing poetic craftmanship....

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Surya . 14 July 2009

sure everything is in his hands. including your dress. voted10 surya

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Sameer Ahmed 06 July 2009

We are nothing in front of the will of God. A very splendid imagery has been portrayed in this beautiful poem with so much observational methodology ingrained in the essence and thus conveys a very strong message of the oneness of God......10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 July 2009

How naked we are In the hands of God.......wonderful image....like a naked child in our hands.

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It reminded me How naked we are In the hands of God..... God has kept key ih his hand so we behave properly and finish the mission.......10 read mine i am disgrace and welcome home

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