Friday, August 15, 2008

.naked Comments

Rating: 2.4

I sit in the bath
letting the water run out
not moving
my body glistening from the
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YURI DURAAN
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Kesav Easwaran 31 October 2008

beautiful poem...examining, critical and open, one's own scar rich bruises rich naked life activities with in the enclosure of one's own mind...very meaningful write...10

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Nkululeko Mdudu 27 August 2008

the body's nakedness as a symbol of the soul, bare and bruised, not at all like that of it's earlier form, this as everything has an impact on a naked soul, little wonder why it often gets lost.(I don't know if i've found the meaning of this poem) but it is beautiful

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 August 2008

Different style with beautiful voice.

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 18 August 2008

A body, naked, wet, dry, a female body in the night, a body waiting for. It's difficult to stay in front of it. We're waiting for a tale of its body, so we'll not be voyeurs.

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 August 2008

soothing and being naked in the bathroom and not feeling sensuous, , , , wel written

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