Thursday, November 17, 2011

Nakama 仲 間 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nakama, what a word!
So many meanings
big difference it makes
of good and bad
it's all that it takes
to feel acceptance.
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Elena Sandu
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Vipins Puthooran 01 January 2012

Peace may encircle this universe/ a good poem! !

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

NICE POEM A HAPPY NEW YEAR

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Rekha Mandagere 21 November 2011

Friend, one can be happy by widening one's circle from oneself to universe! I just remembered Maslow's theory of hierarchy while reading this gem of truth. Man's need changes from physiological needs to self esteem. How nicely you showed society is greater than an individual. The lines are lovely and logic oriented. Great! I must give 10++++

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Unwritten Soul 18 November 2011

Japanese :) I dont even know what it really mean but when i read the poem as whole of understanding as i can, i think it's about a circle of everything...a end point meet start point sealed and re-cycling the relationship to keep eternal where we can feel like there's no start no beginning..it just naturally happen...i love the positivity in your write..it awesome spirit! Arigato Elena.._Unwritten Soul

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