Saturday, September 2, 2006

Naivety Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come, journey with me
Into imagination
From the melancholy tones
Past the wailing moans
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Abby Koning
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William Jackson 04 September 2006

Well crafted poem. I will have to ponder this one! Well done!

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Moon Batchelder 02 September 2006

such a vivid dream this weaves upon the mind...so haunting...much enjoyed this one...

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