Thursday, November 8, 2018

Nailed To The Beds (2) .... Comments

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obtrusive
barren cold
here and beyond
annual strike
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 November 2018

A lovely poem that conveys care and concern. I agree with the wonderful comments of Sir Kumarmani. Thank you for this information and advise. Well crafted and conveyed write.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2018

In this lengthy month beyond our perception barren cold strikes and unknown disease attacks and children fear. But the fear will go away. New light of mercy of God will organize beautiful life. An amazing poem is well penned.Health factors are major and most noble and most interesting definitely..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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