Sunday, October 28, 2018

Nail And Nail Cutter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jack has cut grown nails by a nail cutter,
Cut nails have colour just like of butter.

Utter amazement he feels and soon he jumps,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dylan Chris 06 November 2018

Hey dear great poet, how fun giving you are! How does peculiar idea come to your mind I wonder! I am giggling and giggling and giggling. Ha..ha..ha..ha..ha..ha..ha.. Jacks's nail may scratch me. I shall stay away. Worthy fun read I have done.

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Indira Renganathan 04 November 2018

Very much an enjoyable poem...I wonder how you get this kind of amusing subjects....congrats Kumar 10++++

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2018

This poem put a smile on my face :) ....wow! ...such a humorous couplet poem! A quite surprise!

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Dave Walker 30 October 2018

The nail cutter is part of life, and you have maid it a part of poetry. A very ingenious poem.

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Kalpana Barik 30 October 2018

My nails have grown, you cut, cut, cut. No one can catch me and cut my nail, my nail cracks nut. It is wonderful and very funny. I cannot stop laughing.

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Very interesting poem on Nail Cutter, I liked the metaphor used in this poem, Nail cutter is something that checks the overgrowth of the nail so that it should neither bend, break and hurt later. In the same way if we keep check on our ego and cut it with humility and humbleness our growth and progress with be continuous, Thanks for sharing this thought provoking poem..10+++++

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Some correction.........humbleness our growth and progress will be continuous.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 October 2018

Nail cutter is valuable tools for human /// Poem on nail and nail cutter - very interesting to me /// always good writings

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Muzahidul Reza 29 October 2018

Jack has cut grown nails by a nail cutter, Cut nails have colour just like of butter.......... wow! well beginning of this cultural and lifestyle poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Julian Figueroa 29 October 2018

If lion has cut nails then how can he will attack deer? Very funny writing! This nail couplet has given more fun than any other Limerick.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2018

Among the lovely poems of Mahakul Ji, like among delicious dishes this poem stands as chutney. Enjoyed it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 October 2018

A thoughtfully crafted amusing stuff rich with rhyme and rhythm, enhancing the melody of the verse. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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Susan Williams 28 October 2018

I think I can truthfully declare that this topic has never been attempted before! ! ! ! ! hahaahahahahahahahahah- -very fun read

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Briyanna Lemon 28 October 2018

I could not stop giggling. This was a very funny poem reading. How did you think to write a poem on nail? Then scratch on glass. ha ha! ha ha! ha! ha! My God!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2018

A one of a kind and fascinating write. Vividly conveyed and.portrayed. Amazingly humorous.10++++

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 28 October 2018

OK.... I'll take the nail cutter class next time...😁😁😁 I'm also wanna jump and remove pain! Imagery. Interesting poem. Thank you, Sir, for sharing!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 October 2018

Hehehe, nice one, ... Kumarmani.10+++++++++++++

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Dogma Daniman 28 October 2018

Wow! This is a very funny poem and you are fun giving man. The way you describe nail it amazes me. Idioms related to nail are properly used. This poem will give fun to other readers too. I hope so. I have never read such a nail poem earlier.

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Lyn Paul 28 October 2018

A funny write making great use of the word nail. I was quite gobsmacked when I saw a picture of Jack's nails. A great flow full of humour.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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