Nahi Milti....Ghazal Comments

I love you but don't know whether it reaches you, Though I am walking but don't know whether will reach destination Ships won't find their ways during Tsunami When the clouds are thick, birds lost their ways

Read translated one seems pretty good.

wow.... very beautiful lines

Wah Wah badiya kavita hai.10

Mutasir kun khyalat se labrez yeh nazm ek chalakta hua jam hay, Ek toote hue dil ka rooh ki gahraion mein utar jane wala paigham hay............................10

Waah waah waah.... You just made me speechless. such a great write from a great poet. I don't have enough adjectives to admire the beauty of this poem. many thanks. rating- infinite.