Nagging On A Monday Morn (3) Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Nagging On A Monday Morn (3)



As I was walking along the dunes
heard clearly the restless tunes
of the shouts across the miles
the cold breeze has
taken away the smiles….

Never ever one like I doubt ‘bout you
through all these years
traveling worldwide in ebb and tide
romantic atmospheres now collecting tears

but last night, all the night all the time
constantly my feared heart frightened of these fears
would they turn into bigger smiles
or stay they all-time tears?

Dear Lord, please help me
while I'm walking further in my life
shifting true love on my life-path
in eternal true love, the crown of my strife….



© Sylvia Frances Chan
MONDAY MORN the 3rd of SEPT 2018
@ 8.51 hrs A.M. West-European Time

Monday, September 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ti is number 3, please have a pleasant read,
sincerest,

© Sylvia Frances Chan
MONDAY MORN the 3rd of SEPT 2018
@ 8.51 hrs A.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 June 2020

At present we cannot give respoinse below your comment (after the maintenance of PH) anymore, so I write that down here. Thank you for your understanding. Thank you so much for your kindest and precious responds and compliments. You constantly read my poem as it must be read. Thank YOU Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God's Blessings for you and your beloved family in Abundance.. Amen.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Walking on the ridge of sand is risky as there is chance of loosing sediment formed by the wind. Travelling worldwide with romantic atmosphere gives amazing feelings. Lord with greatest mercy helps us at each step. So his love protects life and dunes both. A beautiful and outstanding poem is excellently penned.

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