Thaky paaun aur rasta buhut hay
Safar kismet se wabasta buhut hay
Mai jeena sara tum pe waar deta
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Wow! ! I understand all of it. It was so pleasant. The feel was far beyond my imagination. sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart.
Payal, you maybe not understand few words but i dont understand any hahaha but still i feel the warm of the poem, i know it because its from Jahan_Soul
Acha hy lkn revise karo..... aksar lines ma lafz kam hyn.... Rhythm nahi ban pa raha....... Koch grammar ki problem feel ho rahi hy..... Words ki music pe focus karo.......
wow...ok i may didn't understand few word but other words made me understand them....i love it it is incredible and very enjoyable and very romantic....bravo sir
Wow! ! I understood most of it. It was so pleasant reading this composition. The feel was great and far beyond my imagination. Sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart.