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A splendid job is done. A nice poem with wonderful metaphors,10 for it.

The sun bites this morning on another. The son has stopped before me, ..........................wonderful imagery by reach of adulthood, yet another phase splashes with blue, eyes glow, cheeck sparkle lo! the quest still there smiling the fine eyes, the luscious green, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

'the smile hammered hasn't departed as quickly! ' i love the humour in this line. this sweet poem speaks out volumes of love and concern tsira has over her teen age son...

Tsira, so quickly does the childhood vanish and our sons grow to be men. Still we carry with us always the memories before then. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

First shave now the fun starts, and the caring and the worrying also starts, the process of manhood takes its stuttering first steps nice write enjoyed Chris 10

A wonderful write Tsira. First time to shave. A thrilling moment, but one day, in the not so distant future the thrill wanes and it becomes a chore. But, for now, there is much joy in the 'growing up.' Thanks for sharing. Best regards Richard