Thursday, January 31, 2008

NĬ ShĀ Ng Haì Le WǑ (You Hurt Me) Comments

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You harm me
with your beauty

and I am glad
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Dónall Dempsey
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Dee Dee Wright 31 January 2008

I had to laugh at this...it made me smile...only you would attempt to turn the phrase YOU HURT ME into a positive love poem. To be hurt with her beauty and to be healed by it too...living on a knife edge. I love the way you made this cut both ways. such a clever little trick! Tears...tears...tears of joy! love Debbie Debs

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I always think it is better to feel something than nothing, be it good or bad. Enjoyed this. t x

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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