(n) 3 (Ballad) The Mermaid (Part Iii) Comments

so she is in his arms...in his home...what happens next TO? ...waiting eagerly...love...nalini

It has taken me all day to get to these due to kids and holiday and what a relief they are Tranquil Ocean? If only life was as vivid as fairtales or our dreams such as your poem story depicts? A wonderfully romantic story of life transformed by the right coupling with love and perfectly complimenting imagery. Can't wait for the next part! Smiling at you, Tai

ahhh, such is amouri, with-under the depths of the Sea, as so well depicted with thy Mghty Pen, T.O.''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR