Saturday, November 7, 2015
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There's nothing as sweet as the smell of your sweat
So elusive as the dance that we haven't done yet
Your hand on my waist
My head on your chest
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Mpheng Magome
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Kumarmani Mahakul
07 November 2015
Wonderful expression of love poem shared here really. Very interesting sharing.10
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7/20/2025 3:08:17 AM # 1.0.0
'Nothing in this realm is forbidden, Stuck in my mind, he's amazing His beautiful smile's excruciating And I can't stop. Nothing in this realm is forbidden, This beautiful world I'm creating But it all still feels excruciating I want to stop.' Altgough not a big fan repetition, I liked how you used these stanzas to fit in your poem, which is really, really good... Thank you for sharing :)
I actually originally wrote it as a song and I forgot to edit before I posted it here, thank you for liking it anyway.