Wednesday, August 30, 2006

(n) 1 (Ballad) The Mermaid (Part Iv) Comments

Rating: 3.4

Intoxicated and spent, sleep overcame them as the moon bid adieu
Gentle rays of the morning sun murmured to her through the window
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 August 2006

WE'RE GETTING INTENSE HERE T. O., ...BUT SO FAR SO GRRRRREAT! ''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Preeti - is here! 30 August 2006

Hiiiiii FINALLY...like finally I read part 2,3 and 4! ! ! I just love your style, every word is so perfectly chosen, every scene more beautiful than the previous. Waiting for part 5. Preets

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