(n) 1 (Ballad) The Mermaid (Part I) Comments

how beautiful and sensual, you clever thing! i have a mer poem too, it's called ODE TO WATER LILY, tell me what you think. x

So from the Tranquil Ocean comes the beautiful mermaid and the best part is she stays here....... we hope she comes back soon! This is wonderfully woven with well-chosen words and the effect is this beautiful poem... GOOD READ!

WOW...i love disguises of any sort...and if its a mermaid, i just cant wait...great poem...love...nalini

ALLRIGHT T. O.>WE'RE TALKIN 'BOUT A SERIES SHOW....TIS FUN...HAVE DONE QUITE A FEW OVER TH' YEARS MYSELF....GREAT INTRO....GOOD LUCK! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

It's beautifully told TO! Waiting for part 2! Preets

Sweet mermaid tale Tranquil Ocean. A gentle stroll through your romantic poetic mind, I look forward to the next installment, Tai