Friday, October 5, 2018

Myth Be Love At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Doubtful, love lights up at the first sight,
In one go few might get it all right;
Jane breaks six hearts or more,
Five times Joe seems unsure;
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Savita Tyagi 07 October 2018

Great limerick. Courageous are the ones who take a dip again and again! Some are scared or aren’t even given a chance.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 October 2018

Thank you, you liked Myth be love...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2018

Love lights us the first sight. You have brillinat perception and you have expressed this well in this poem through humour. Finding a good kite is important to take flight. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 October 2018

Limericks have acquired the reputation of 'leg-pulling verses'. But they are capable of serious thoughts as well. I often use them for a mix cause. Good to know you liked it.

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