Friday, October 16, 2009

Myth 7 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eurydice was burying the Gold Sword in black dune
Persephone was kissing warmly the def shepherd
Eupalinos Tunnel was covered by the bouquets of jasmine
Were People of Assini telling how to embrace dreams?
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Obinna Eruchie 17 October 2009

All the parts especially this one in the series are pleasant. Keep it up.

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Fay Slimm 17 October 2009

Your myth poems are all filled with excitement Ahmad and some of the names and mythical events are familiar to me although not all - - you have worked hard to compose such poems - -well done.... Fay.

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Dragon Wizard 16 October 2009

Nicely written(as always) 10+ Kind regards, Dragon Wizard

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Raj Nandy 16 October 2009

As requested I have read all the Myths today. I enjoyed reading them, since I am familiar with all those names mentioned! All are well written! You may like to provide foot notes at times for the benifit of your readers. -Raj

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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