Monday, April 9, 2018

Mystical Journey Comments

Rating: 4.8

In slumber as I lay
Most beautiful dream came my way

It was such a mystical night
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Meena Mustafa
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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2020

A nice imagery of words, of the mystical journey you had! The poem begins well, but at a later stage it seems that more emphasis was given in search of rhyme than the natural flow of words. Yet, it is a good poem to read and recite.9/10.

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Meena. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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I hope there is room on the bus for me because that is the kind of ride I envisioned it would be. A most beautiful written poem with a heavenly promise. Ingeborg

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