Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Mystical. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sun beats
ultra-violet rays
whip
her soft-pink
...
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint 23 July 2018

Thank you guys. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this, it's one of my favourite pieces. Love Al

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 12 June 2018

Wow! Nice images drawn in this mystical poem...

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2018

Then finally she is naked and bare Just a tarnished lifeless bud representing what she used to be ..Mystical sense through out the poem.. original in thinking and its portrayal. thank u dear poet. tony

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Alistair Plint 28 November 2012

hi thomas and ruby (below) thank you so very much for your feedback. just wonderful to recieve. al.

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Ruby Honeytip 20 November 2012

Glad her name wasn't Ruby I tell ya; -)

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Alistair Plint 19 November 2012

Hi Matthew Thank you for your very kind words, Al

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Matthew Wilkinson Luck 09 November 2012

Fantastic and flowing!

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Alistair Plint

Johannesburg, South Africa
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