Mystic Rain Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Mystic Rain

Rating: 5.0


Let it pour.
Let it rain.
Let us dance in
it insane.
In the beat.
In the hum.
Underneath the
rain that comes...
Lift your head,
to the skies.
Don't let the
Moment, pass you by.
Sun is high.
Meadows tall.
Leaves sparkling &
all. Feel the mystic,
of/in...The call...
Of the drops of rain,
that fall...

Wednesday, April 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 12 April 2017

I love your loving evocation of the rain. I could be satisfied just with these sensory words that let my Imagination experience sensation mentally. But you do something more which is most welcome. You are describing not just a physical experience but a spiritual one: FEEL THE MYSTIC, / OF/IN...THE CALL... etc. Actually your poem shows it's not addition - physical + spiritual = a heightened state. The physical and spiritual are already fused and your poem shows how to experience that unity of things. And the JOY tyhat flows immediately and abundantly from it. You are what Yeats called THE DANCING MASTER OF MY SOUL! !

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Rebecca Navarre 15 April 2017

Goodness! ! ! Thank You! ! ! Daniel, You Are Ever So Kind! ! ! ! ! And Your Poetry Is Ever So, , , Wonderfully And Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Christopher Tye 13 April 2017

Wonderful poem, rain is so magical in nature and important to life.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 April 2017

Thank You! ! ! Christopher, For Such A kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Flows With Such Beauty And Heart! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 18 April 2017

This poem had me dancing in the rain- - the beat had my feet tapping and had me hearing the rain pattering on the leaves of the trees on the roofs of the houses or the metal roofs of the sheds. Absolute magic captured in this piece! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

Made a revisit today. Enjoyed reading again. Thank you, Becca

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

A very lovely poem with great flow of words. Wonderful poetic expressions! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

A beautiful poem that depicts the wonders and importance of rain. Rain is a blessing and the rhythm that it creates soothes the spirit.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 July 2021

A magnificent poem.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2017

It is really a beautiful poem on nature espicially on rain having thrilling expression. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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