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In my mind afloat
Drifts a mysterious small boat,
Lulled along
In contemplative song,
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The shear beauty of the words of this poem earns it a ten. Now to delve into it deeper, I believe we all have that person and that boat in our minds. In my mind it is an old hermit high on a mountain, communing with God. To each his own but I believe this to be your masterpiece Smoky. God bless. Juan
It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal
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7/28/2025 10:57:28 AM # 1.0.0
It takes a very fine poet to write this way! ! Keep on writing! Constance