Friday, December 4, 2015

Mystery Of The Ghost In The Attic Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went to bed - It was a peaceful night.
Until I was awakened to a horrific sight.
The attic door was opened wide,
South of my room, thrust aside.
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Paul Warren 20 January 2016

Nice telling of a mystery solved.

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Spock The Vegan 08 October 2016

Thank you. I enjoyed telling it.

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Joyce Barnson 05 December 2015

I'm glad you solved the mystery! Sounds scary.

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Spock The Vegan 08 October 2016

Yes it was scary, but when you're scared you know you're alive. :)

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Kim Barney 04 December 2015

Enjoyed reading this. Spooky story solved through science. Well done.

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Spock The Vegan 08 October 2016

Thanks. It felt good to solve it, and I slept better after that.

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Jim Franckum 04 December 2015

Good suspence story! I enjoyed the mystery and moon discovery JHF

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Spock The Vegan 08 October 2016

True experiences make the best material for a poem I think. This one was fun to wright.

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Shakil Ahmed 04 December 2015

Up at dawn to do the chores, the sun was hot. The ghost of the night before had been forgot.- -Beautiful lines, thanks for sharing

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Spock The Vegan 08 October 2016

Thanks for your kind words.

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