Mystery Of Love Comments

The rest of the poem I've read and plan to comment on IF you request it. bri : )

stanza 2: I 'HAD TO' look up 'nimbus', and what a shock I had! For readers, I think you should write to make your meaning(s) more clear. AND 'inform' or 'in form'? ha ha

I'D LIKE TO SEE PUNCTUATION MARKS. Some poems 'succeed' without them; let me see if this one 'works' for me. I need to finish reading it.

stanza 1: I don't THINK you want or should have 'for' here: 'A love never anticipated for'.