Monday, June 8, 2009
Mystery Man Comments
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There was a husky voice inside me
That kept me closing my eyes to see
He was mysterious but still so lovely
Still so kept hidden beneath my misery
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Princess Bernadette Anillo
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Taher Al-Shemaly
08 June 2009
Nice one, but maybe the second verse needs a little bit of re-ordering. Nice job.
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7/23/2025 9:40:06 PM # 1.0.0
What a Perfect poem... Where did you find the words sweetheart or you are an angle Well 10+ for your marvelous skills