Saturday, November 14, 2015

Mystery In Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

open blessed sky
let know i cry
Feeling alone in the desert cold
Let know one pass by
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Anita Sharma
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Emptiness is very deep but feeling this in grace of life expresses love in cloud. Super composition shared with great imagery and feeling. Nicely drafted poem shared here.10

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M Asim Nehal 14 November 2015

Superb.......Crafty poem, I liked it. emptiness is deep Without looking back feeling eternally blessed graced

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